Take another look at the sentence:

The sky grew pink, seagulls began to cry, and waves rolled onshore as Diane took her morning stroll on the beach.

When you list grammatical items, you must use parallel structure. Here, the sky grew pink, seagulls began to cry, and waves rolled onshore are all short main clauses, so the list is parallel.

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