Here is the sentence:

Attached to the email, Charlotte sent her boyfriend Byron another photographic self-portrait with eerie red eyes.

Very impressive! You recognized that too many words separate the modifier from its target. Attached to the email, a participle phrase, is currently describing Charlotte when its target should be self-portrait.

To fix the problem, you should revise the sentence like this: Charlotte emailed her boyfriend Byron another photographic self-portrait with eerie red eyes.

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