Take another look at the passage:

Bored with the revision of his research essay. Patrick poked the soft front of his flat-screen monitor, fascinated by its squishy surface.

You chose to connect the participle phrase to the main clause that follows, like this:

Bored with the revision of his research essay Patrick poked the soft front of his flat-screen monitor, fascinated by its squishy surface.

Unfortunately, removing the period alone will not do the trick. Review the rules.

Go back to the sentence to try again.

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