Take another look at the sentence:

During the summer when a variety of fruit is in season, Melville always avoids the fresh peaches, the fuzzy skin brushing against his lips makes Melville think that he's eating a small rodent.

The comma between season and Melville is completely correct. When a variety of fruit is in season is a subordinate clause. It must be connected to a main clause. Melville always avoids the fresh peaches is the necessary main clause that completes the thought.

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