Here is the sentence again:

Everyone always invites Marc to the movies, his jeans are so oversized that he can sneak in two two-liter bottles of soda, which he straps to his thighs, saving his friends from the outrageous drink prices at the theater.

Everyone always invites Marc to the movies is a main clause. His jeans are so oversized is another main clause. To connect two main clauses with a comma is to create a comma splice, a major sentence error.

A period after movies and a capital H for his would take care of the problem.

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