Here is the original item:
The potted geranium wilted
(A) from lack of
water on Terry's kitchen window
(B) while
the faucet dripped wastefully,
(C) staining
the porcelain sink with rust.
You wanted to do this:
The potted geranium wilted,
from lack of water on Terry's kitchen window while the faucet
dripped wastefully, staining the porcelain
sink with rust.
The comma after wilted is incorrect. A prepositional phrase at the end of main clause rarely needs punctuation. You need to reconsider your choice.
You might want to review the rules.