Review the original item:
The terrified passengers aboard the 747 gripped their armrests as the jet
bucked in a bad stretch of turbulence after
a ride like this one, everyone knew that five minutes on Disney's Space
Mountain would feel like relaxing in a rocking chair.
You wanted to fix it this way:
The terrified passengers aboard the 747 gripped their armrests as the jet
bucked in a bad stretch of turbulence;
After a ride like this one, everyone knew that five minutes on Disney's
Space Mountain would feel like relaxing in a rocking chair.
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