Sentence 16

Directions: Read the sentence below. Then decide whether or not it contains an error in parallel structure.

You might want to consult the rules before you make your choice!

Eli held the phone on his lap, trying to work up the courage to call the beautiful Leodine. All the while, his foot jiggled, his nostrils flared, and sweat was collecting on his upper lip.
  1. Yes! This sentence has an error!
  2. No! This sentence is error free!
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